Anne and Marco Contis: Anne is an attractive woman from a wealthy family who has depression postpartum and doesn't feel good on her own skin. Marco is very good looking, unlike Anne, he had to fend for himself from a very young age.
Cora: A six-month-old who went missing.
Cynthia and Graham: Anne and Marcos’s neighbours. Cynthia has a bubbly and flirty personality, while her husband is a reserved person. They don’t have any children, in fact Cynthia seems to have something against infants.
Detective Rasbach: He is determined to find out what really happened with the baby.
When the couple saw the empty crib, they immediately called the police. Marco admits he didn’t lock the back door every single time he checked on the baby. The garage door was found wide open and their motion detector had been deactivated, whoever took the baby had to come out the couple’s back door.
After being asked if they had any idea who might have taken Cora, Marco says Anne’s parents are wealthy people. Anne thinks about it and for the first time she feels optimistic about the whole situation, if the kidnapper is after their money maybe her baby won’t get hurt.
Hours later, the detective is informed that one of the neighbours saw a car driving away from the direction of the Contis’ garage exactly at 12:35 am with its headlights off. This new information is very interesting considering the last time Marco checked on the baby was at 12:30 am.
The couple is required to talk to the media. In their statement they omit the baby was home alone, but it is just a matter of time before someone finds this out.
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Claudia Leticia Mendez Caamal
Claudia,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very nicely written second report. Here's your feedback: I would suggest saying that no one saw who had left the house through the back door. I would also suggest mentioning that the couple omitted saying that...
Your mark is=98.
Cheers,
TB